tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5446070095733469795.post6705471069573277622..comments2023-12-27T08:47:46.468-05:00Comments on Irish Gumbo: she is my am.eric.an girlIrish Gumbohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07386134334156997186noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5446070095733469795.post-34321332260208982442010-12-28T22:23:08.188-05:002010-12-28T22:23:08.188-05:00Ditto fragrant liar.
Also, just amazing.Ditto fragrant liar.<br />Also, just amazing.cheatymoonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06328903955238115971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5446070095733469795.post-21605419878519469772010-12-28T21:22:25.930-05:002010-12-28T21:22:25.930-05:00You can't rewrite the moment. The cry caught ...You can't rewrite the moment. The cry caught in my throat! What a lovely, priceless moment!<br />I love that you're paying attention, that you are fully present! She is one lucky angel!shabby girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12340974325967555770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5446070095733469795.post-5758880203473953192010-12-27T22:54:54.563-05:002010-12-27T22:54:54.563-05:00Hi IG - I have to side with your other readers on ...Hi IG - I have to side with your other readers on this one. This poem is beautiful beyond words. I'm no poet, but I don't think there's any way you can make it beautifuler. Except maybe to work in the word 'beautifuler'. :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5446070095733469795.post-28210721804398830162010-12-27T21:03:59.998-05:002010-12-27T21:03:59.998-05:00Oh how I love this piece. It's honest and pure...Oh how I love this piece. It's honest and pure and I'm not sure this is a piece you should edit. <br /><br />I'm happy to stop by here and 'see' you are finding joy.<br /><br />Merry Christmas (a wee bit late) and may 2011 bring you radiant happiness and love.<br /><br />~LolaLola Sharphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14394765053485642935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5446070095733469795.post-26254829165930385412010-12-27T15:13:22.615-05:002010-12-27T15:13:22.615-05:00Beautifully written, Irish. Sometimes when we rewr...Beautifully written, Irish. Sometimes when we rewrite, the original intensity or poignancy of our experience is lost or muted. I think because the editing process is almost a sort of cleaner or gentrification. And you're right. Sometimes no matter how hard we try to put the precise words to our emotions, they don't do enough justice to the actual feeling of being there.Fragrant Liarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09452052210826471034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5446070095733469795.post-32401412182821689872010-12-27T12:28:05.700-05:002010-12-27T12:28:05.700-05:00What a gift to recognize the moment and just hold ...What a gift to recognize the moment and just hold it in your heart.<br />Peace, Grace and love..Sondrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13542988419001941245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5446070095733469795.post-49758669858367815912010-12-27T08:51:32.549-05:002010-12-27T08:51:32.549-05:00It's beautiful just the way it is now.It's beautiful just the way it is now.Joaniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08943128638748507880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5446070095733469795.post-56194022889339956012010-12-27T00:44:55.939-05:002010-12-27T00:44:55.939-05:00I think your poem captured the moment beautifully ...I think your poem captured the moment beautifully Irish. The mood, the images, and the love of the father most of all. Well done.Pseudohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10430783970802030846noreply@blogger.com