14 January 2010

Winter Poetry Slam: Dos

Leaves falling, swirling
wind turns chill, your memory
cannot hold my hand.

5 comments:

  1. I let go
    just as heats
    rode up
    on high wind
    I could see
    high above tree tops
    I knew it was for the best... :)

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  2. wind turns chill

    now you're cooking

    and measuring
    what holds
    what doesnt

    your brevity is frightening

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  3. Winter falls, in sadness
    from the trees.
    Wind stings the eyes
    and chills the soul.

    (I know, it fails the haiku syllable requisites)

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  4. I hope I don't have to write a poem to comment?

    This one's my favourite.

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"Let your laws come undone
Don't suffer your crimes
Let the love in your heart take control..."


-'The Hair Song', by Black Mountain

Tell me what is in your heart...