17 September 2012

Magpie Tales 135: She Holds the Ocean

Venus and the Sailor, 1925, by Salvador Dali via Magpie Tales

Sinking into her gelid depths
drawn under by aphrodisiac waves
pillowed between gravid curves
pulling me across the rail
swells upon a Mare Libido
into which I fall with abandon
never to be seen again


  1. and sometimes there are just things you dont want to saved from...ha...gelid, gravid...nice use of words sir...

  2. Enough to make us all go hot under the collar. lol

  3. Great word usage in this poem. I had to use a dictionary, but now I know two new words. Nicely done.

  4. there are words here that i dont understand but somehow i feel dirty?


"Let your laws come undone
Don't suffer your crimes
Let the love in your heart take control..."

-'The Hair Song', by Black Mountain

Tell me what is in your heart...