A sharp, fresh take on the prompt.
That has to tell the longest story I've ever seen written in only three lines. :)
Nice send off to lots of meanings!
Like the brown leaves ... that last line? Blew me away!!
Beautiful, Irish...only I come to life in the fall and winter...
If you say this holding your tongue it's way more different...lovely as always, IGUB awesome
nicely done Mr Gumbo
Yeah i get the time thing !, finely perceived, Irish
Nice haiku with rich imagery.
Cleverly woven Haiku Gumbo! :-)
"Let your laws come undoneDon't suffer your crimesLet the love in your heart take control..." -'The Hair Song', by Black MountainTell me what is in your heart...