10 December 2012

Magpie Tales 147: Tara Cognita

Image from The MetaPicture via Magpie Tales

Sailed the seas of her
roaming over black rogue waves
pounding the fearful ego
 
A bittersweet joke
Lost on Mare timoris,
compass in the heart
Bed, a safe harbor
Her breath, waves lapping the strand
soft hips, map to home

11 comments:

  1. .. the heart bed ... a safe harbor. Lovely poem.

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  2. Fresh and vivid take on the prompt...

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  3. I love getting lost in your words for a few minutes when I can.
    Thanks for the moment.

    Jason

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  4. "waves lapping the strand"

    Love this line, took me far away. Visuals of driving the coast of Dingle! Simple, concise and lovely piece.

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  5. Your first and last lines wrap the soft centre like a chocolate truffle. :)

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  6. Oh those bittersweet jokes! Nicely done!

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  7. ...a pleasure to read... and yes, wonderful take... smiles...

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  8. Lovely poem, Mr Gumbo :)

    May you always always find your way home.

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  9. A port in every girl? Thre cheers for safe harbours.

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"Let your laws come undone
Don't suffer your crimes
Let the love in your heart take control..."


-'The Hair Song', by Black Mountain

Tell me what is in your heart...