as salt breeze insinuates itself
through the cottage window,
curious for a taste of heaven
Tapers flicker, small spotlights
on the remains of a dinner
started in afternoon languor
and finished in evening fervor
Zephyr curls and twines, slowly,
ruffling tousled sheets and tangled limbs
that define a different kind of table,
a stage for the passion play and coda
Aeolian breath carries the musk,
across the room, the lovers' nostrils flare
at the memory of the eating
and the tasting of their own
She smiles, asks What are you thinking?
He smiles, eyes closed, and answers:
An old saying: shallots are for babies,
onions are for men, garlic is for heroes.
To that, he murmurs, I add: "goddess".
Forty cloves and a chicken make dinner,
he says, but a hero and a goddess...
they make love
Photo and prompt courtesy of Magpie Tales via the lovely Rene at Not The Rockefellers. This is my first ever Magpie Tales prompt. Hope you enjoyed it!
Quite a feast for the senses, delicate yet substantial, flavored with classic simplicity but not afraid to flaunt the haute cuisine. Most excellent mag!
ReplyDeleteThis is incredible!! WOW! Talk about talent!
ReplyDeleteI really like this!!
homerun
ReplyDeletei called it :)
Welcome to Magpie Tales
Oh yeah, I'm there. Sensuous and Delicious!
ReplyDeleteLovely dance from languor to fervor. Welcome to the Mag!
ReplyDeleteTurn on, I see red/ Adrenaline crash and crack my head
ReplyDelete-What a tasty poem! Kudos.
I really like how we get so many ideas out of one photo. Everyone interpreting it differently.
ReplyDeleteviscous time
Stunningly romantic write...so glad to meet you, please come back to Magpie....blessings...bkm
ReplyDeleteA feast for all the senses, great Magpie debut, welcome, it will prove addictive.
ReplyDeleteI'll never look at a garlic clove quite the same again.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting my blog. I'm a big Metallica fan, thought it was cool that you have their line with your comment box :o)
ReplyDeleteExcellent first go at Magpie- love it!
ReplyDeletenicely done....sexy! xo
ReplyDeleteWow! What a wonderful interpretation!
ReplyDeleteMmm. Suddenly I'm hungry...
Pearl
That was terrific!
ReplyDeleteway to turn up the heat on the mag...very sensuous...nicely played...
ReplyDeleteWas it the light on the cloves that prompted this interpretation?
ReplyDeleteP.S. Must buy garlic. :)
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