26 March 2011

Spring Poetry Slam #2: Traffic

Surprisingly cool,
traffic sound on wet pavement.
Heart follows the cars.
Posted by Irish Gumbo at 12:01 AM
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5 comments:

  1. Captain DumbassMarch 26, 2011 at 11:14 AM

    I couldn't write a haiku if somebody put a gun to my head, though really, could anybody under that kind of pressure? Is this a haiku? Meh.

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  2. TaradharmaMarch 26, 2011 at 5:19 PM

    "cars whispering on the rain...."

    an old line from a 30 year old poem of mine.

    I like "heart follows the cars." Excellent.

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  3. PseudoMarch 26, 2011 at 9:43 PM

    Lovely Irish.

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  4. UnknownMarch 27, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    noise bliss

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  5. LeslieJune 17, 2011 at 12:24 AM

    Follows to where? Where did the heart wish to travel?

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"Let your laws come undone
Don't suffer your crimes
Let the love in your heart take control..."

-'The Hair Song', by Black Mountain

Tell me what is in your heart...

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