I love this one - raking the crystalline blue. Sounds sparkling, icy cold. The tree branches so covered with ice that they are clattering.
The nasty weather has finally reached us here in southern TX. Grey, cloudy, rainy. Not cold yet. Probably later. But not that cold, just annoyingly chilly and wet.
It's been a long, tiresome week, hasn't it? Or is it just me?
I read, then I count your words...are you writing a certain style? Not Haiku...Gumbo Stew, okay that was lame,and I can tell the subject is excited, so is it an observance of your daughter... I will stop trying to analyze poetry...
Ahhh my limbs were waving wildly today ... as I was dancing around emphatically proclaiming that my camera had come in the mail. he he
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Wildly windy here today. Happy weekend, IG.
ReplyDeleteI love this one - raking the crystalline blue. Sounds sparkling, icy cold. The tree branches so covered with ice that they are clattering.
ReplyDeleteThe nasty weather has finally reached us here in southern TX. Grey, cloudy, rainy. Not cold yet. Probably later. But not that cold, just annoyingly chilly and wet.
It's been a long, tiresome week, hasn't it? Or is it just me?
excellent
ReplyDeletei feel the cold
really so good
the picture of a thousand words written in just 10
Layered clouds hover
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slowly, full moon sets.
I read, then I count your words...are you writing a certain style? Not Haiku...Gumbo Stew, okay that was lame,and I can tell the subject is excited, so is it an observance of your daughter... I will stop trying to analyze poetry...
ReplyDeleteIt's all about the spiraling upward, for me anyway.
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Elise
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